Twenties Life

Hello and great site. I submitted my plan today. Thanks.
Edward

You could make a forum like the others have suggested, it will help foster growth and discussion.

Also, a fan on Facebook!

Hello, I've submitted an entry from my e-mail, caveatcyanide {at} gmail {dot} com (in case of harvesting spam bots).

One way to improve the site is to maybe move the search bar to the top right, beside 'Policies'? Also, you could change the search button itself from the colour green to black to match the theme.

Thank you for hosting this contest!

Hi! I sent my plan just this evening. Hope I win!

clowers_1[at]hotmail[dot]com

As for a tip on how to improve the site, I think it is a great site already. My only suggestion is that is that there is so much information on the home page, the first time I visited, I was overwhelmed with what to read. I would lose either the popular posts or recent posts as a start.

I became a friend on facebook as well.

Thanks for the chance to win!

sent plan from ACN380@gmail.com
Suggestion: To merge the News highlights and Latest News section and create a linear vertical latest news section that gives the subject/title and a small blurb of the article. If the reader wants more information they can click the link but if not they can keep scrolling. This allows for an easy way to know the articles that have come out in chronological order and also knowing when to stop if they have already previously been reading stuff from the site.

I sent my plan and followed the directions! Good luck to me!

Hello there. My name is Emily Santos. First of all, I would like to thank you for holding this contest with such a unique requirement for entry. Fortunately to say, I have submitted my business plan through my gmail account: mizzemilysan85 [at] gmail.com It might appear in your spam inbox because it is a fairly long piece. And I have also become a fan of you on facebook.

As for some tips on improving Twentieslife, I highly suggest you create a platform where your visitors can discuss various topics with each other. Yes, a forum shall do it. And also, you can create a sidebar just like the one you did with "Recent Posts" for recent comments. That way, readers can keep tract of newest comments made by others and respond if they like to. Furthermore, you can get rid of the "Categories" side bar because you already have them as headers on the top. It seems to me to be a bit redundant. And if you can help it, you should try to recruit more young bloggers to your site or be more open about guest authors. Of course, you should not sacrifice content for mere more posts. So far, I have found every post to be quite comprehensive and of high quality. Keep up the good work.

I entered thru my email address bigvincec at aol dot com. One way to improve the site is more in-depth video reviews. And also a forum where members can share their views. fan on fb

send my e-mail - cdm 65 at coxdot net - and My suggestion for your site is - keep up the great job ! and maybe change the colors like another user mentioned - some of it really hard to read.
thanks for the chance to win :)

Entered using the yago at optonline dot net

My suggestion for your site is to revamp the site's header. Move the links for the rss, feedburner and twitter to the left, center the logo and set the searchbox under the date. Then take the two black link bars and combine them under the header.

Having only the one balck line should brighten the page. Then change the category links to different colored tabs and have the linked pages match the tab colors. That way the home page could retain its current feel, but the subjects themselves would look different and new.

i wanna win the all in one

Sent in my email with z7enZ@live.com

Tip i notice there isn't a Forums so maybe you should add that for people to communicate

I sent you a email from Akahenry@live.com
As far as a tip goes , what I would do to improve the site would be to increase the amount of
advices and chit chat about sexual intercourse and how to approach men and women.
This is important because Young adults at this age begin the part of their life , where they experience sexual feelings and emotions.

If not , the site can be improved by putting more shine onto the website's layout - such as making it more colorful and attractive to the young adults. What would be nice would be , adding a video on the homepage to promote the site or bring news to the young adults.

I sent you a email from ddemby5@gmail.com
I think that the content on this site is pretty good but alot of people doesn't know about it, but the theme is probably needs to be changed in particular the black, it kinda brings down the mood.

I sent you an email from jennifer228 at hotmail dot com.
I would like to see most of the red disappear, particularly in the dark gray areas. I don't even try to read it because it strains my eyes. The larger white areas would be better in something easier on the eyes, too.

This is to let you know I've sent you an email from jackiem.clark[at]albertahealthservices[dot]ca . As for a tip to improve this site, I would say stream-line. There seems to be endless amounts of content in the side bar that could be hidden and make it a little easier on the eye.

Thanks
Jackie